Have you ever heard the old adage: “You’ll catch more flies with sugar than with vinegar?” Well, this saying still rings true; especially if you need to write a complaint letter.
Frequently by the time we need to write a complaint letter we’re likely to be irritated and angry. If this is the case for your complaint letter proceed reading before you proceed writing. If you write a complaint letter that reflects this annoyance your claim will likely be ignored because you will seem irrational and vengeful. The best complaint letters, and the ones that receive the best responses, do not sound angry at all. That is where the sugar (i.e. politeness) is more powerful than the vinegar (i.e. the anger).
It’s important to keep in mind that the recipient of your letter likely isn’t the person who is causing you the grief and it is their job to fix your dilemma not to be disrespected or insulted. If you’d like to receive the best response and action for your complaint follow the rules of TEA POTS:
dates, and copies of the receipts, bills or contracts.
Explain logically, clearly and specifically what went wrong.
Avoid speculation. State only facts.
Provide a possible solution. State what you expect the reader to do so the problem is solved to
your (reasonable) satisfaction.
Optional warning about consequences.
Ta-ta! Bid your reader farewell in a professional and friendly manner.
Spell-check your letter and enclose copies NOT originals of all described and pertinent
documents.
For sample complaint letters, a complaint letter quiz and additional help please visit page [1] or [2] below.
[1] "How to Write Complaint Letters." English Language Centre. 04 Apr. 2009 http://elc.polyu.edu.hk/cill/eiw/complaint_letter_constructor.htm.
[2] Infoplease: Encyclopedia, Almanac, Atlas, Biographies, Dictionary, Thesaurus. Free online reference, research & homework help. — Infoplease.com. 04 Apr. 2009 http://www.infoplease.com/ipa/A0002121.html.
[3] Oliu, Walter E., Charles T. Brusaw, and Gerald J. Alred. Writing that Works Communicating Effectively on the Job. Boston: Bedford/St. Martin's, 2006.
[4] 04 Apr. 2009 http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/a/a4/Complaint_Department_Grenade.jpg.